There is no Beauty

Me and Reicon enjoy discussing story idea's when I should be studying at school.
When our characters finally find ourselves thrown into a countrys battle, Reicon again looses control and reverts to his much deadlier Berserker self.
In the process Luna, whom we have barely met, and my character DesShade (for lack of an actual name) attempt to warn OUR troops to retreat or be struck down by their own comrade.
DesShade and Luna take to the air, but are instantly grounded by an onslought of arrows.
From their overhead view, Luna see's first hand for the first time the horror and hell which is war.
Upon crashing to the ground she forces herself to stand, but is completely frozen in shock of the demonic imagry she just oversaw.
And while her thoughts run colder then ice, the battlefield continues to rage into a scorching inferno.
As DesShade rushes to protect her from the next wave of the enemy attack...

-_- I had hoped my coloring skills would have improved greatly by now.. but the longer and longer I worked on it the worse and worse it got-Until I finally just resolved to settle and go to bed.

Initially there were going to be arrows embedded in DesShade's wing.. and a background.. and That black blob beside Luna used to be her wing -sigh-

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Luna I hope you don't mind me using your character without your consent. As well as including her into an unwritten story.
Haroka and Wolf-Hawk-Dont' feel left out. This story is ment to imcompass the majority of my life through fairytales-meaning as soon as I know your characters well enough they will make an appearance.
Not that i'm going to write it.
Me and Reicon simply enjoy brainstorming it.

Well enjoy. Comments welcome, though I already know everything that's wrong with it.

If I get alot of time or alot of boredom i'll redo it and make it look nice.
But until then you get the Meh. version.